L.G: Describe my senses during a specific moment.
S.O.S: Describe each of my sentences
- see
- hear
- touch
- smell
- taste
-vary your sentence starters
-similes
As the rain falls from the sky my cloak gets wetter and wetter,while i stand there my nose faints smelling the wet tar and stones on the road.The water on my umbrella falls into my mouth before it touches the ground,the rain drops start wetting my clothes underneath my cloak,
the sound of the cars going past are like planes soaring through the sky.
good job on useing all of your senses
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