purpose:recount a moment in time when you were scared.
L.G:Describe your senses in detail through descriptive language and elaboration.
S.O.S:Describe your senses -see,hear,smell,touch,taste
‘I shuffle down the empty street with my eyes flickering back and forth. Every opening door and every bird call caused me to jump.My hand subconsciously tightened into a tight fist and i quickened my pace,the noise of a car behind me forced me to scream and run,the blury street lights turn off and on like someone playing with the switch.Around the corner from my dull and dark house i'm eager to find out what will happen...4 houses away from my house a big black dog stares into my eyes like it's taking my sole,i move slowly it barks i run and ‘scream’ i see my house i unlock the door quickly get inside catch my breath and go to bed.
Hi Wene
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Hey Wene,
ReplyDeleteI loved your story it was so interesting and i like how you followed your SOS! Great job.
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ReplyDeletewell done your writing was really interesting and you have achieved your s.o.s
Hi wene
ReplyDeletewell done your writing was really interesting and you have/did achive your s.o.s
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