Reflection

L.G:use punctuation, and good vocabulary

• Paragraphs
• One page minimum

Purpose: persuade Mr elder and Mr Moore whether there should be reflection or not

Audience:Mr Elder/Mr Moore

Intro:

Reflection does it serve a purpose No i mean unless you're gonna make us do something else other than sleep,reflection has no purpose kids go to a room and silent read for 20 minutes i mean ugh,today i will be informing you why reflection has no purpose.

Paragraph 1:

I do not believe that reflection serves a purpose, because the same children are usually back in reflection for doing the same thing. Insanity is doing the same thing over and over again and expecting different results. If reflection, did not work the first time, the school system needs to be creative and create another cause to correct the behavior like helping the community pick up rubbish or picking up rubbish around school.

Paragraph 2:

reflection only starts the children on a long line of understanding that when they do something wrong, they are simply pulled apart from their peers for an extended amount of time to think about what they did wrong. I think more constructive punishment,as well as giving the kid a sense of purpose. It may even keep them more busy and likely to use their time in wise ways

Paragraph 3:

reflection is not effective You often get put in class reflections because of other people which is just unfair and not right. Teachers should be banned from reflections because they can't be trusted and I know I have never had a fair one. Also ban the nosy parkers forcing you to sign your planner…

Conclusion:

In conclusion, i hope i have informed you on getting rid of reflection because it doesn't help change kids attitudes i mean reading is that really a punishment,think about it.