L.G:use sub titles to label your paragraphs

Purpose:Inform your audience about an event in New Zealand

S.O.S:Have three clear paragraphs

• Us rhetorical questions
• Include examples

Intro:

The TSB Bank light festival is an annual event held in pukekura park new plymouth.running free every year mid december to early february.

Para1:

Each summer the TSB Bank festival of lights transforme pukekura park,one of New Zealand's premiere botanical gardens into a magical illuminated nighttime wonderland of multicoloured lights gleaming amongst the trees,attracting more than 5 thousand visitors each year.

Para2:

At night,fluorescent pebble paths sparkle beneath excited feet,majestic trees and plants glow,waterfalls and lakes shimmer and shine beneath thousands of lighting displays.But  its the features such as the  talking giant,fire poi dancers or parades that captivate the young and not so young.

Para3:

The festival's original date goes back to 1935 when a fountain with lights beneath it was installed  in one of the parks lakes to commemorate the coronation of the queen.The first illuminations were put up in the park in 1957,and from there the displays grew alongside the christmas lights display in the city streets.

Conclusion:

I strongly believe,you should give the festival of lights a chance it would be an great opportunity for the whole family this year the festival of lights is on December the 18

Give it a go you’ll love it.